Feedback Considerations

Based on the feedback given, I need to not make assumptions about what people may or may not now.  I do a lot of assuming that people know about how quilts work and about Disney movies that to me seem like required viewing for children my age or younger and therefore parents of those children.  I need to see objects from the point of view of someone who has not seen these things as much as I have while editing my unit 1 work and throughout my work for unit 2.  I also need to connect primary source documents more closely to secondary sources as well as put more detail into how they are connected.

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